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Journey To The West:Retelling

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A retelling of the masterpiece that is Journey to The West
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER-1

Chapter 1: The Stone Egg That Dreamed of Heaven

Long before stories had names and before the stars memorized their place in the sky, there stood a mountain.

It did not rise like the patient mountains shaped by time's gentle hand—no. This one was thrust forth, carved not by age but by will. It was as if the earth had clenched its stone-blooded fists and hurled a challenge into the firmament, daring the heavens to answer. The mountain rose like a cry, a defiance, a prayer.

And it was beautiful.

Unmapped by human foot or godly decree, the world whispered of it in dreams and silences. Those who had climbed every mountain still found themselves gazing at distant horizons, longing unknowingly for the one they could never reach. The one that stood aloof and unyielding—neither beast nor god had marked it.

It was later known, in dragon-tongue and heaven's breath, as the Mountain of Flowers and Fruit.

Here, spring was eternal. Not the spring of temperate weather or fertile ground, but the spring of beginning, of innocence, of unspoiled wonder. Plum trees bore phoenix-fruit, translucent like fire caught in bloom. Groves of jade bamboo rustled with laughter that hadn't yet been spoken. Birds of brilliant feathers sang in tongues older than gods. The air smelled of first rains and last dreams.

No winter dared touch it. No autumn could dim it.

And at its highest peak, above the clouds that kissed the world's brow, lay a single stone.

Not fallen, not placed—born.

It rested in a nest of moss woven by time, not birds. By day it drank the sun. By night, it shimmered with the music of stars. Sometimes it glowed softly at dusk, as if catching a whisper from the horizon. Sometimes it pulsed faintly, like a heart trying to remember its first beat.

It waited.

Waited while empires below rose and fell. While oceans shifted and dragons slumbered and the gods grew bored.

Waited.

Until one morning—one that began like every other, with golden fingers of dawn stretching lazily across the world—the stone cracked.

Not violently. Not like a shattering.

Like a flower blooming.

A small sound. A chime. A breath.

And from within came a boy.

Not a babe swaddled in flesh, but a creature raw and radiant, already standing, already grinning. His fur was gold spun from sunlight and mischief. His eyes—deep pools of onyx—flickered with two opposing stars: curiosity and rebellion. A monkey. A child. A question. A storm wrapped in flesh.

He blinked once.

The wind paused.

He inhaled.

The trees bent low, as if in greeting.

He exhaled.

The stars trembled.

He had no name, no history, no inheritance but this wild, perfect world and the heartbeat that echoed inside him like a drum made of thunder.

And yet—he bowed.

To the East. The South. The West. The North.

Instinctively. As if some ancient courtesy stirred in his bones. As he did, his eyes opened fully, and golden beams shot out—slicing the morning air, cleaving clouds, splitting mountaintops. They arced toward the Celestial Realm, where the immortal palace floated upon pillars of mist and divine thought.

Atop a cushioned dais, wrapped in robes spun from morning light, the Jade Emperor reclined lazily. A pipe of ivory bone nestled in his fingers. Beside him, symbols danced—constellations shaped like wisdom, authority, and the distant ache of boredom.

The emperor's gaze did not move, but his voice echoed like rivers carving valleys.

"What was that?"

The Gold Star of Venus, one of the Twelve Celestial Lords, knelt before him. His eyes had already closed, seeking the truth beyond sight.

"I believe it comes from the Mountain of Flowers and Fruit, my lord."

"From whom?"

The star opened his eyes.

"A monkey."

"A what?"

"A monkey, sire."

The emperor blinked. Then, with the quietest of chuckles, he leaned back.

"How curious. Watch him."

And so Heaven watched.

Below, in the world unblessed by prophecy, the monkey boy rose from the stone that had been his cradle. He walked forward on legs unpracticed and leapt into the wind as though it had called him by name. Every color dazzled him. Every leaf was a story. Every sound was a mystery to be solved by laughter.

"...Pretty," he whispered, his very first word, not to anyone in particular, but to the world itself.

And the world whispered back.

Soon, others came. Monkeys with coats of red, brown, black, and grey. They had seen the beam of gold. They had watched the heavens blink. Curious and half-afraid, they followed it to its source and found the boy near the Silver Bamboo Glen, drinking dew, chasing light, giggling as butterflies landed on his nose.

He didn't notice them at first. He was too busy learning the shape of the world through touch and taste and wind.

"He leapt before he crawled," one monkey murmured.

"He laughs like thunder," said another.

"Did he cause that light?" whispered a third.

None had answers. Only questions.

They called him Nameless. Not as an insult—but in awe. No name fit the shape of him. He was too new, too wild. He was not made. He had become.

Time passed. Or at least, it tried to.

But time here ripened, it did not rot.

The Nameless Monkey grew. And oh, how he grew. He chased lightning across the cliffs and rode wild hawks for miles before letting go midair just to see what falling felt like. He bathed in starlight, plucked dreams from dandelions, and once balanced on a cloud for three whole breaths before landing—barely bruised—in a grove of orchids that laughed when they bloomed.

He was madness. He was brilliance. He was wonder walking on four limbs and sometimes two.

The other monkeys followed—not out of fear, not out of duty—but because the world was simply better when seen through his eyes.

One morning, they gathered at the Pool of Skyfall, where waters plunged from heights unknown and danced into a natural basin of light and mist. As always, they played. As always, they laughed.

But this morning, an elder with fur white as starlight stood and asked:

"Is there among us one who dares to find the stream's source? Legend says a cavern lies beyond that waterfall—a palace of stone and dreams. None have returned. But if one were to enter and return, he shall be crowned king!"

The monkeys murmured. Excited. Fearful.

None stepped forward.

Except him.

He drank dew from his hand. Looked up at the fall with mischief already forming.

And said, with a voice like bronze and a grin like sunrise:

"What path is worth walking, if not the one that disappears with each step? I shall be king!"

And he ran.

The path was cruel. Thorns clung to his ankles. Mist blurred his sight. The waterfall's roar grew louder with every step, like the war-drum of some ancient beast. But he pressed forward—not because he was fearless, but because his heart had already moved ahead and his body refused to be left behind.

He stepped into the curtain of water—

And vanished.

Behind it was wonder.

The Cavern of the Water Curtain, whispered in broken poems and half-memories. A cathedral of stone carved by nature's softest hands. Stalactites like chandeliers. Pools that rippled with the dreams of those not yet born. The air buzzed with forgotten lullabies.

And he stood, soaked but grinning, golden fur glistening, arms outstretched.

And he laughed.

Not a childish giggle. Not a mocking chortle.

A laugh of awe. A laugh of becoming.

A laugh that cracked the cavern and reached even the oldest trees outside.

The monkeys heard. Their hearts raced.

And then—his voice, deep and wild:

"Brothers! Sisters! The home we never knew is waiting!"

And they came.

One by one.

Ten by ten.

They came.

And they saw. And they named him.

Not Nameless. Not Anomaly.

But King.

Monkey King.

Not for power. Not for strength.

But because he dared. Because he believed in wonder. Because his laughter made the sky feel closer and the future less terrifying.

In the heavens, the gods turned their eyes. In the Jade Palace, the emperor's pipe stilled. In the corners of the world, old beasts opened their eyes.

Because the storm had begun.

A monkey, born from stone, had named himself king.

And nothing would ever be the same.

For this monkey was born from fate.

He would defy fate. He would destroy fate and in the end he would embrace the world.