Chapter 9 - important authors note

Sorry everybody I'll be going through the story and editing it because you all have been saying there's been problems with knowing a conversation begins and ends as well as it's being jammed up together I'm going to fix that and as well as other things leave down in tell me what you think I should fix and what needs to be improved upon what I should keep in what I should remove make the story better or what I should add you can leave a comment to me on web novel or you can leave a comment in my discord here's my discord linkhttps://discord.gg/rtGTPg28 wish you all good day I won't start editing or send out any chapters next couple days until I get your thoughts on the matter