Hey guys I'm 'starting' a new fanfic here with my own oc
I say starting but I just want to put this place holder so I don't forget this idea.
I got the general story but I am waiting for the new Redundancy Vol to come out so I can see how the author goes with Aisha character or what else he adds to the story.
I remember speed reading the deleted chapters and oh boy "what a Alabama moment"
I not gonna go into the defense of "oh the legal age is smaller or the incest is fine in this world argument" I golet that ... But I do strongly agree how it happened was kinda bad.
I mean she literally grooms him and we are suppose to take that as genuine love, I don't know, like I said he is rewriting it so maybe he can convince me then.
I'll give him props for saying 'he writes what he wants to write' ... Mad respect.
It's just I feel like it 'ruins or regresses Aisha character a bit (my opinion)' Like character regression is fine and all, I mean look at Zuko but its meant to help progress or learn something in the end. Which I don't think he does with Aisha.
Again it's been a while since I speed readed it, I have a habit of speed reading electronic books so I'll wait for the hard copy, and maybe some stuff is missing.
ie. Like she says no, hugs him, then the chapter ends and the next scene is Rudy catching them in the act, I was like 'did I miss something'
And then you get her and Ars pov around the end I think and it basically says how she seduced/groomed him and how she has psychopathic tendencies. Or maybe it was her reasoning why she says she 'loved him', if I recall it was like she doesnt dislike him so it must be love, something along the lines. If I recall it stated that she didn't know what love was so she clinged to this feeling she had for Ars
I sound like I'm hating, I'm sorry, I'm 'fine'with the ship, it just how it happened and how they project it as genuine. Like I don't think there was a moment when Ars 'earned' Aisha love
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Ok decision time here,
I'm curious if I should just 'speed run the story where my oc come in the story (when they were kids) or I should let it take place after the events of the main story, right before the shenanigans happen with Aisha/Ars.
I was also wondering if I should keep the 'regression' so that she can learn from it and decide for herself if she wants to stay or not
A good example would be like how Leroy canonically needs to be born so that he can have a child that joins the hero in the sequel
Let me know what you guys think of this project.
Again it's gonna be on hold for now, until the new LN comes out in English and I read it, I know from the preview he is already doing some changes.
It's like when I watch the scene when they were deciding what to do with Lilia and I was like why did she switch up so fast, it must of been the setting. And then I read the LN and read how the mom was a member of the Millis faith,I believe, and how she knew the dad wasn't a believer and the faith only believes in one spouse so she needs an excuse to accept the maid. Something like that.
It will also give me a chance to work on my Zuko fan-fic and get better at writing.
Or maybe I should just base it on the web novel version of the story ...sorry the ideas are just flooding in my head as I write cliff notes for this fic ... I think thats the reason I've been procrastinating the Zuko fic
Thanks