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The next day, the castle bustled as usual, servants scurrying down hallways and guards patrolling their posts. The air was filled with the sounds of everyday life—echoing footsteps, the clatter of dishes, the hum of murmured conversations. Yet amid it all, there was one figure who stood out in perfect stillness. Taro stood in front of the child's room, his hands busy polishing the long, straight blade of his sword. The rhythmic motion was soothing, the repetitive action allowing his mind to sharpen as keenly as the weapon he held. Every flick of his wrist, every sweep of the cloth against the steel, seemed to carry with it a sense of control, of purpose. This was his anchor—his focus in a world filled with chaos and unpredictability.
Above him, Sayaka hovered lazily, her ethereal form shimmering in the morning light. As always, no one could see her but Taro, and she reveled in her invisible presence.
"You know," she began, her tone playful, "you really are obsessive with that thing. Bet you'd polish it even if it was a wooden stick."
Taro didn't look up, his attention unwavering from his work. "It's my only weapon," he replied coolly. "Keeping it sharp is common sense."
"Right, right. Common sense," Sayaka mocked, rolling her eyes. "Just admit you love that thing more than food. And that's saying something coming from me."
Taro wiped off the last speck of dust and held the sword up to the light, letting the sunlight dance along the gleaming edge. "Maybe. But unlike you, it doesn't steal my food."
"Oh, come on!" Sayaka huffed. "I'm a growing spirit. I need my snacks."
"Spirits don't grow," Taro said, slipping his sword back into its sheath with a practiced motion and resting it against the pillar beside him. "You just have an unhealthy obsession with food."
"An obsession would mean I think about it all the time. Which I do. So, I guess you're right." She laughed, the sound light and carefree, contrasting the grim atmosphere surrounding them. "Anyway, about last night..."
Taro's eyes narrowed at the change in her tone. "What about it?"
"More demon presences," she said, her voice dropping to a more serious note. "But only one spirit seems active. Which is weird, unless... well, unless it's a bunch of them mashed together."
Taro's brow furrowed as he thought this over. "A conglomerate of vengeful spirits, then."
"Seems like it. What do you want to do?"
Taro's gaze grew colder, his tone steady and unyielding. "We take action. Tonight."
Sayaka's voice picked up with a mischievous edge. "Finally. You're actually planning something."
Taro did not respond immediately, his eyes distant as he processed the situation. The child's illness, the strange occurrences, the cryptic presence of the spirit—it all seemed interconnected. His instincts told him that the child's life was on borrowed time, and there was no room for hesitation.
That night, the castle stood bathed in the pale glow of the moon, silent except for the distant sounds of the wind rustling the trees outside. Takeda sat by the pond, his figure silhouetted against the water's shimmering surface, his eyes locked on the reflection of the moon. His thoughts spiraled, torn between the fatherly concern for his son and his duties as the lord of the city. The boy's illness had plagued him for weeks, and there were still no answers. Desperation had begun to gnaw at Takeda's soul, but he hid it behind a mask of calm.
Suddenly, a shadow fell over him. His hand shot to his sword, drawing it with the speed and precision of a seasoned warrior.
Clang!
The sound of metal meeting metal rang out through the still night air. Takeda's arm jerked with the force of the impact, his eyes widening as he stared at the figure before him.
"T-Taro?"
Taro stood there with an unbothered expression, his posture casual and graceful as ever. His sword rested in his hand, poised and ready, though he made no move to strike. "Good reflexes. But not enough."
"What are you doing here?" Takeda's voice was thick with confusion and fear. "You're supposed to be guarding my son's room."
"That's exactly why I'm here," Taro replied, his tone as cool as ever. "I found out why your son is ill."
Takeda's breath caught in his chest. "What? You have? What is it? Tell me!"
Taro's eyes were cold, his words deliberate. "Not here. First, tell me something." His gaze locked with Takeda's, piercing and intense. "Has someone close to you died recently?"
Takeda hesitated. The question seemed out of place, but something about Taro's presence made it impossible to ignore. His face darkened, and after a long pause, he slowly sat down on the edge of the pond.
"...Yes," Takeda murmured, his voice barely audible. "My wife. She died during childbirth."
Taro said nothing, but the expression in his eyes softened ever so slightly.
"But why would her spirit be vengeful?" Takeda continued, his voice trembling with disbelief. "She was... she was the kindest woman I ever knew."
Taro nodded slowly, his voice calm but laced with an edge of bitterness. "Spirits don't always turn because of hatred or cruelty. Sometimes, it's desperation. Despair. Love twisted by pain."
Takeda's eyes shimmered with moisture, and he clenched his fists in frustration. "But... no... that can't be..."
"There's only one way to find out," Taro said, his tone firm and unwavering. "Come with me."
They stood together, walking back to the child's room, its door dark and silent under the weight of the night. The air in the room felt heavy, suffocating, as Takeda's eyes landed on his son's fragile form lying in the bed. His skin was pale, his breathing shallow, and the scent of sickness hung thick in the air.
Taro's voice broke the silence. "Ordinary people can't see spirits unless they either lose control over their form or allow themselves to be seen."
Takeda's eyes widened. "And... what does that mean?"
"It means she's here," Taro said softly, his words hanging in the air like a promise of imminent danger. "Now, stand back."
Taro's hand stretched forward, and the shadows around him seemed to respond to his will, curling around his fingers like a living thing. He began to chant in a language Takeda did not understand, his voice steady and relentless. The shadows began to twist in the air, forming symbols that flickered with an unnatural glow.
The boy's body jerked, his chest heaving, his breath coming in gasps as the room seemed to tremble under the power of Taro's incantation.
"No!" Takeda cried out, rushing to his son's side. "Stop! You're hurting him!"
"Hold him still!" Taro barked. "If I don't do this now, his soul will be devoured."
Takeda's hands gripped the sheets, his eyes wide with terror as he helplessly watched his son thrash in the bed.
"Sayaka," Taro called.
The spirit floated forward, her form translucent and flickering. "Calm down, kid. This is gonna feel weird, but you'll be okay."
Taro's voice grew louder, the words of the chant more forceful as the shadows around his arms coiled with an almost predatory energy. The room seemed to close in, the air thick with dread. Takeda's heart pounded in his chest as he held his son down, the boy's body writhing against the sheets.
And then, a massive explosion ripped through the night.
BOOM!
The sound of splintering wood and crashing stone filled the air as a section of the castle erupted in a violent burst of energy. Takeda was thrown off his feet, his body slamming into the stone wall as a monstrous, writhing form emerged from the wreckage.
The beast was a mass of crimson shadows, a grotesque conglomerate of teeth and eyes. Its tendrils lashed through the air, hungry and ferocious. It roared—a guttural sound that shook the very foundation of the castle, rattling windows and sending dust flying.
"GRAUGHHHHH…!!"
Taro was knocked back by the sheer force of the beast's roar, crashing into a nearby pillar. His body slammed against the stone with a sickening thud, but he forced himself to rise. Pain lanced through his chest, but his resolve remained unshaken.
"Dammit..." Taro muttered, his voice a low growl. "You're tougher than you look."
The beast's tendrils whipped out, smashing everything in their path. Taro sprinted through the hallways, pulling the creature away from the main castle, where Takeda was busy evacuating the rest of the building. Taro reached his room, throwing open a chest filled with talismans.
"Let's see how you handle this," Taro muttered, grabbing handfuls of the paper charms and hurling them at the creature. They stuck to its body, glowing faintly with an ethereal light.
"O,foul demon born from hatred," Taro muttered an incantation.
"You are not welcome in this realm,release your grip on the living and return to hell!"
The creature howled in rage, thrashing as the talismans burned through its form.
Taro's eyes gleamed with determination as he unsheathed his sword. Shadows clung to it, dark and deadly.
"I shall send you to the depths of hell!"